A BROKEN SOUL

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    A BROKEN SOUL

    To ever lose oneself..is to have lost everything.To have lost everything is to never had gain nothing.Trying to be something i was not, for a love i never had..the gain belonging and lost what i did have. A wondering soul lost behind darkness.. there is no light to fine my way out. A wondering soul bond for the depths of hell..to free these thought i rather jump instead,to save my soul i ask him for help. Is it to late i ask myself? Then he reach out and gave me his hand.

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    Phoenix9 commented on A BROKEN SOUL

    12-28-2008

    very nice

    bforibus commented on A BROKEN SOUL

    12-28-2008

    very beautiful. if its sincere, thats about how long it takes.takes years of doubt and seconds to forgive. good write

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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