A BROKEN SOUL

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    A BROKEN SOUL
    To ever lose oneself..is to have lost everything.To have lost everything is to never had gain nothing.Trying to be something i was not, for a love i never had..the gain belonging and lost what i did have. A wondering soul lost behind darkness.. there is no light to fine my way out. A wondering soul bond for the depths of hell..to free these thought i rather jump instead,to save my soul i ask him for help. Is it to late i ask myself? Then he reach out and gave me his hand.

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    Phoenix9 commented on A BROKEN SOUL

    12-28-2008

    very nice
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    bforibus commented on A BROKEN SOUL

    12-28-2008

    very beautiful. if its sincere, thats about how long it takes.takes years of doubt and seconds to forgive. good write
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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