A Dark Moment

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    A Dark Moment
    I am
    lost in my mind
    steeped in dark emotion
    shadows block the light from my eyes
    and all I see is the blackness of pain
    which holds my heart captive again.
    Swift flow my bitter tears
    which burn my skin
    in trails.




    *Note: Form - Rictameter

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    windtalker1964 commented on A Dark Moment

    08-20-2009

    another great poem as well what inspied you to write this one? was this a personal experince some time in your life as well
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    origionalmerlin commented on A Dark Moment

    04-23-2009

    agrees with the above comment, well done!
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    dangedmanjr commented on A Dark Moment

    04-22-2009

    cool form...the content also climaxes right in the middle, this is known as kayastic structure, it's a really cool form, very nice!
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