A HAIKU: BUSTING HOPELESSNESS
Wriggled from slumber
From horizon it beckons
Piercing gloom asunder
A HAIKU: BUSTING HOPELESSNESS
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Tags: Darkness To Light
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GUSTY commented on A HAIKU: BUSTING HOPELESSNESS
05-13-2010
- WELL,WELL,WELL...LET ME GUESS...IT CAN'T BE THE MOON; LET IT BE THE SUN,THEN!!! SHORT AND FULL OF WEIGHT!!!! GREAT!
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ginga commented on A HAIKU: BUSTING HOPELESSNESS
12-24-2009
- Afrique, Interesting choice of words. I like the slumber and asunder association. ginga
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12/24/2009
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