A Kiss

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    • TheRaven
    • My writings are far and fewer between these days. At least I've started working on refining what I post.

    A Kiss

    A kiss to span the ocean
    With passion I'd never seen
    With it left me dizzy
    Far too real to be a dream

    In a moment I was smiling
    Silence within my grin
    She was giggling quite a bit
    And so we kissed again

    Everything felt natural
    It was a cold night though
    We talked a little longer
    But in the end she had to go

    As I was fixing to leave the car
    I thought I'd catch her of guard a bit
    But when I went for one last kiss
    She readily met me with her lips

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    ccslim commented on A Kiss

    02-12-2009

    Hehehe da kiss! wOOt! Great content and plot. Shaky meter in the end.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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