A Pain In My Soul

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    A Pain In My Soul

    When asked

    Most people

    Wish for the big objects

    Like

    Money,

    Big houses,

    And cars

    But

    In my case

    I

    Just want happiness

    Under the sun

    And smiles

    Under the stars

    I wanted

    A big house

    And

    At the moment

    I still do

    But

    More than ever

    I want

    All

    Of the hatred

    Dismissed

    From my heart

    And my life

    Too

    Dying

    Is a thought

    That enters my mind

    On and off

    Which keeps my heart

    Hard as stone

    Instead of

    Feathery soft

    I wonder

    Which is better

    Being with

    Or

    Being without

    Knowing something

    Or

    Just about

    I

    Cant stand

    Not knowing

    How

    I will end

    Up

    In my future

    Will

    My soul be

    And remain

    Pure?

    I love myself

    And

     I love everyone

    The same

    But

    Love cant

    And

    Wont

    Remove

    My pain

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    ahardwalk commented on A Pain In My Soul

    11-30-2010

    Love this poem!!!! But i do think love can ultimately relief your pain
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    sweetnspicy8283

    12/01/2010

    love can relieve and cause pain ((thx 4 reading))

    blackfootlady commented on A Pain In My Soul

    11-30-2010

    Start watching the stars at night Very simply put and exceptionally Good.-God Bless-Black
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    sweetnspicy8283

    12/01/2010

    i love gazing at the stars it takes u n2 a dif world that u dont want 2 come leave ((thx 4 reading))

    Mrpoetry commented on A Pain In My Soul

    11-30-2010

    great display of love for God than for material things.............
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    sweetnspicy8283

    12/01/2010

    i actually wrote this about 12 years ago but it amazed me at how accurate it stl is 2 my life ((thx 4 reading))

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