A Silent Tear

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  • Loneliness
    • deedeemcgee
    • writes as a release, that is what has gotten me this far in life, some I can write here, but most are personal reminders of past and future and an outlet to make better choices these days.

    A Silent Tear

     As I lay here alone
    sheers blowing with the breeze
    my mind wanders to previous years.

    I feel your presence here
    though your face I cannot see
    Falls a silent tear
    to know we cannot be.

    The hypocrisys of life
    we could not endure
    to much chaos, to much strife
    to many things unpure

    I cried so many tears
    the day you went away
    I learned of brand new fears
    and now here I lay

    The quiet of the night
    the shadows on the walls
    the dawn begins to show
    and my loneliness appears

    But silently I know
    your love for me still holds
    we cannot let it show
    we must do as we are told.

    And falls....................................A SILENT TEAR

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    lonewolf commented on A Silent Tear

    11-27-2009

    i feel your loneliness. spoke about it in 'empty soul". tomorrow dawns a new day, and with it comes the possibility of a new love. blessings to you
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    laydbak1 commented on A Silent Tear

    10-02-2009

    I feel the deep sense of loss, the empty solitude, the irony of loneliness, and the twinge of hope near the end... You did your job well here... Good write...
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    PedroSM commented on A Silent Tear

    09-30-2009

    That was great,You fear and your lonliness seems genuine.That fact the something is really bothering you is was brings the poem alive!
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    deedeemcgee

    09/30/2009

    Thank you for your comment.That is an extremely old one.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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