This is an ABC poem, the 1st line begins with an A, the 2nd line begins with a B & so on. I’ve added some creativity, the 1st line also ends with an A, the 2nd line ends with a B & so on. Goddess Durga has 9 appearing forms & there are holy periods of 9 days in which all the forms are worshipped, that’s why I’ve chosen to work with 9 lines. The title is also from A to I. I’ve used a little bit of Hindi, ‘jai’ means glory, so ‘JAI DURGA MAA, JAI JAI!’ means ‘GLORY TO MOTHER DURGA, GLORY GLORY!’ I got inspired looking at the picture, so take a close look. I admire Goddess Durga cause she represents women strength.
ABSORBINGLY GODDESS DURGA, JAI JAI!
ABSORBINGLY ABSORBING EXTRAVAGANZA
BELLOW OF THE MIGHIEST LION, EARTH-SHAKING SUPERB!
CROWNED MIRACLE BEAUTY SPARKLING TITANIC
DRESSED BLOOD-RED AS THE DEVIL WRECKED
EYES WORLD-WIDE, THOUSANDS OF OCEANS CAN DROWN IN A TRICE
FEARLESS AND FASCINATING ON HER BEJEWELLED THRONE ONE-OFF
GODDESS OF THE UNIVERSE, ENERGY ABLAZE ILLUMINATING
HANDS ONE TO TEN, BLOOMING WITH LOVE, POWER AND WEALTH
IMMORTAL YOUR GALACTIC NAME, JAI DURGA MAA, JAI JAI!
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11-23-2009
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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.
Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.
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|---|---|---|
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
| LUCKY ME TO BE YOUR FRIEND! | 1 | 04/06/2010 |
| DUST | 5 | 12/12/2009 |
| ABSORBINGLY GODDESS DURGA, JAI JAI! | 3 | 07/03/2009 |
| WHY THIS JIGGERY-POKER Y? |
7 | 06/07/2009 |
| MY MOMENT PRECIOUS | 7 | 07/03/2009 |
| REACH YOUR DREAMS | 12 | 07/17/2009 |
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