DUST

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    I had written this poem about 8 years ago. Back then our street wasn't asphalted so the dust would trouble us a lot, that's where I got the inspiration to write this poem. I found this poem while cleaning my room so I thought of submitting it out here.

    DUST

    It’s the dry season

    The sun carrying its biggest smile

    Time to wake up

    After a very long sleep

    Time to fly with the wind

    Like butterflies dancing with their wings

    Leaving behind signs of presence everywhere

    Waiting to be wiped off

    To be broomed

    To be washed out

    It’s time to trouble the people

    To penetrate into their eyes

    Vroommm!!!...goes the car

    Clouds of dust blowing in the wind

    Released from the ground

    To flutter down on earth again

    Playing their game again and again

    Through decades and centuries

    Again and again after long sleeps.

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    redbloodink commented on DUST

    01-31-2010

    nice and simply put........... keep writing..... red

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on DUST

    01-13-2010

    I gave you a 10. The picture you took for this really adds to the poem.I am going to put it into my favorites.Thank you. Good Job

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on DUST

    12-22-2009

    I gave you a good rating for this one thumbs up.You deserve it.

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on DUST

    12-22-2009

    This is a very good job. Your talent for creativity shows. You have the makings of a good poet and the drive to get there.Keep up the good work.

    giri commented on DUST

    12-08-2009

    it seems you have got dust allergy and so you spoken well about its effect.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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