Admit It

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    this was a difficult piece for me. i just wrote it fromthe heart. i know it needs work, just look and comment on the words themselves please. thanks guys.

    Admit It

     The day will come when I am finally done with this nonsense; When I realize that there is nothing left to say or feel.
    Why is it so hard for you to see the truth?
    Love used to live here comfortably, but it doesnt anymore.
    We are both like prisoners; forced to live between four walls together.
    You can go on and admit it, I've known for so long now. We are tearing eachothers spirits with the harsh things we say.
    Its not going to get any better until we are apart. Why cant you just face it? The same woman you once fell in love with has become the target of all your worst fears...
                                              ADMIT IT.

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    Papa commented on Admit It

    12-22-2010

    stings tend to put even the most loved pet between the crosshairs. venting all of your hostilities at your most loved is not healthy. it can do nothing but kill a relationship.
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    jenniepennie commented on Admit It

    06-27-2010

    Wow. It takes a special person to put your feelings out there like that. I loved it. Only bravest are never afraid to be vulnerable.
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    ansari commented on Admit It

    06-23-2010

    what you say can be related to the lives of many, many people today. people are going through a lot of stress and this affects their relationships with those they once loved. a beautiful poem but a sad story. hope its not reality.
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    HarverTomsson commented on Admit It

    11-04-2009

    I think it is a perfectly horrid state of affairs when a young beauty in love must seek affirmation from strangers rather than her lover just to make it through the day. Admit it. But this stranger is beginning to admire your irrespressible spunk for doing it. You go girl.
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    danmartyjake1 commented on Admit It

    10-18-2009

    Wow scary feelings that need to be released.... Write on and be exalted!!! 10 from me.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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