ALL ABOUT YOU

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    ALL ABOUT YOU

     I woke up today with you on my mind
    And right through you have been at heart
    I imagined you rising up like the sun
    Ruling the heavenlies shining so strong
    Best part was when you came home to roost
    Setting amidst so much colour and boost
    Amidst such pomp and pageantry
    Flaunting that your very sight
    That i could nothing save in awe stare
    And somewhere at the back of my mind
    Something a bell kept tolling
    That if i as much as turn away from you
    My heart would snap in two. 

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    cheronld commented on ALL ABOUT YOU

    08-13-2010

    Lol...cute one my friend....sounds like the moment when all is going well and you stop and wonder...is this too good to be true...its that part of you that wants to hold that moment of awe and hold it close....almost as if you are scared to move on and then the feeling dies...short and sweet....nice job my friend...Cher
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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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