am listening to what you aren't saying

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    am listening to what you aren't saying
    Tried to filter those words
    Lingered to its substance
    Convened the core of those phrases
    Set to mind to its ingenuity

    No variance taken
    No hampered doubts
    No issued advocacy
    Plainly, listened
    Plainly, believed

    Yet on the deepest thought there’s the wonder wall
    Am I deceived, am I dressed to parody?
    Laughter echoed thoroughly
    But did smile came from that heart?

    Am listenin.
    Yes I am,

    To what you are not saying.

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    StandingBear commented on am listening to what you aren't saying

    01-10-2011

    A beautifully written, self purging write. When one gives, one is also supposed to receive equality. Very nice writing style! SBear
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    Miguel7Rogali commented on am listening to what you aren't saying

    07-22-2009

    mare action speaks louder than words & u have this way of listening to the unspoken words,
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    nhorlandi commented on am listening to what you aren't saying

    03-15-2009

    deep thoughts, classics in a way. Ride on my dear.
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    Phoenix9 commented on am listening to what you aren't saying

    01-17-2009

    i like this one alot very well written indeed
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    rollerderby commented on am listening to what you aren't saying

    01-16-2009

    Well done dear, I'm glad to see taht you're not decieved by mere words. I hope you have a smiling heart still! thanks for sharing Doug
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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