amazing love

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    I wrote this poem for my boyfriend (Daniel) it was one poem that came straight through and everyone that has read it seems to like it so i hope u do 2.

    amazing love

    I love you with all my heart.
    You are my sun that rises every morning with and an intense burning beauty, kissing your amazing lips feeling a sense of joy and happyness run through my body, never wanting it to end, holding you ever so tightly and looking in your eyes seeing my whole life knowing it will never be right unless your there with me in my eyes your more special then a clear beautiful night with every single star gleaming and sparkling in the dark sky.

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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