Angelofdark...

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Angelofdark...

His fangs thrust deep into her flesh
As she gasped for her last breath
In her mind she could not replace
The haunting look upon his face
Eyes so deep, dark, amd cold
Held her body in a stationary hold
Her limbs could not move not a foot or toe
Tears were the only movement she could show
Streaming steadily down her cheek
Her life in the living now looked bleak
This could not be the knight she waited for
The one she would spend her life to adore
Destined for a look in black
Unattended...he had made his attack
How could it have been disguised
The evil that laid deep inside
As her body began to grow cold
Memories of her past started to unfold
The man she loved from back in her past
The one she had wished that would of last
He was a man so caring and kind
He had never been far from her mind
The one she had lost one night in the rain
Ever since then her heart was in pain
But maybe now this Dark Prince could set her free
Relieving her of all the loneliness and misery
She could now be with him once and again
This love story could finally come to an end
Spending eternity with him she could share
All of these thoughts before her last 
                       breath of air.....(to be comtinued)....

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Rhymer commented on Angelofdark...

11-23-2009

I can't resist the dark side of poetry. Loved the write and the scare.

Artie commented on Angelofdark...

11-23-2009

Wow - you already know I like this lol - It's almost like the other side of my poem "Feed". 10 from me

inkmaster commented on Angelofdark...

10-26-2009

good read I liked it ......................................................inkmaster

graceladymn commented on Angelofdark...

10-25-2009

Everyones into vampires these days not sure why exactly perhaps the eternal aspect is what draws the audiences. When I think of vampires I tend to think of the energy vampire type rather than the blood type, but that's just me, who knows maybe you'll write a popular vampire series that will sell like wildfire. This ended in suspense good job.

Mercishae

10/25/2009

Have always been into vamps...its the dark allure of eternal life u r right...the night life also....

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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