SEXY YOU

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  • Love
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  • Emotional
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  • Lost Love
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  • Passion
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  • Erotic

    SEXY YOU

    Passions ignite
    You say my name
    One touch from you
    I go insane
    Heart beating faster
    Clothes hit the floor
    Soft sensuous lips
    Hand on my thigh
    Feeling the heat now
    Of two becoming one
    Flesh upon flesh
    Breath of my breath
    Adoring the nightlife
    Penetrating the dark
    Recurrence of loneliness
    Here in my heart
    Candlelight faint now
    All is now still
    The bed is half empty
    And so is my soul.

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    HarverTomsson commented on SEXY YOU

    11-25-2009

    So much for the bliss of spontaneous coupling.....It's usually the woman who picks up the bill.
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    Rhymer commented on SEXY YOU

    11-23-2009

    You certainly can paint a moment of passion with your words. Including the climax when one has left the building.
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    Artie commented on SEXY YOU

    11-23-2009

    Wow I like the strong passion in this piece! You have captured many emotions - 10 from me
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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