Another girls face

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    Another girls face
    Eyes bright as the sun
    She was always so much fun
    On a rainy day she'd shine
    She was always so divine
    Eyes wide like an owl
    Air echoed as she howled
    So much company around
    Yet no one heard a sound
    Tears burning down her face
    But no one seen a trace
    Of one girl who was trapped
    In another girls face

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    jamesbtaylor commented on Another girls face

    03-18-2014

    Great poem!
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    TheLastCowboy commented on Another girls face

    03-18-2014

    This comes off as a dark poem, you feel the subject of the write in the dark, and seeing herself as a light in the dark, yet she is not noticed to spite her "shine" in the dark. I'm a little lost on the ending with "in another girls face" what were you telling us the reader in that line?
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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