Pain

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Pain

The pain, it continues to seep through my weak and sickened body.
It now sings me to sleep like a lullaby to a child with no fear.
My caged soul, it wants to bloom.
But is only trapped in the set concrete in which is my mind.
Surrounded in a heavy confusion of fear that I've become so infacuated by.
I have hope knowing it is just a passing of lust and not love for this trap.
Praying that the unknown will save me from falling for the sickness in which is thyself.

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optimistic commented on Pain

04-19-2014

Very interesting we can work on poems to create such a beautiful lullaby

TheLastCowboy commented on Pain

03-18-2014

Wow what a great write and you leave so many side emotions at every corner of this write but in my opinion the most important thing you site in this poem is a hope that its lust passing and not love, wow what a great way of making the point!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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