Apple of God's eyez

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    Apple of God's eyez
    I am the apple of God’s eyes.
    The reason for his creation
    Had me in mind before creation
    So he vowed to make life easy for me..

    I am the apple of God’s eyes
    He has been there all along
    Though l can not see Him
    I feel his presence still

    I am the apple of God’s eyes
    He lends a hand here and there
    Leading while i follow
    Pointing ways at crossroads
    Making sure my feet slip not



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    peacefully commented on Apple of God's eyez

    01-12-2010

    Ada, the place to rate your poem did not show up. I would have given you a 10 for sure.
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    peacefully commented on Apple of God's eyez

    01-12-2010

    Ada, this was beautiful. You are so right about being the apple of God's eyes. I am so very glad that you know Him and that he can keep your feet from slipping. You are a beautiful person as well.
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    adachukwu2001

    01/13/2010

    Thank you sheila, this is one of the best comment i hv heard this year,,, Tell you what....i appreciate this and it means a lot to me...God bless you

    RickyArsenal commented on Apple of God's eyez

    05-29-2009

    yeah, 'the apple of God's eyes' captures the commitment of the Omnipotent, to u and infact to all of us, a good one Ada, my sister. Luv it!
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    adachukwu2001

    01/12/2010

    Ur welcomed dear...thanks for commenting and dnt stop loving...

    peacefully commented on Apple of God's eyez

    04-23-2009

    I loved the simplicity of this one. I used to live close to Nigeria. We were missionaries to Ghana back in the middle 70s
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    adachukwu2001

    01/12/2010

    Thank you for commenting on the poem...Ghana is a great place with stable economy...am sure u enjoyed ur stay there. do u still do missionary work....perharps i could join u sometimes when am on holiday..

    ccslim commented on Apple of God's eyez

    04-11-2009

    A great start in content with meter off a tad.
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