AS I GROW!

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    AS I GROW!

    I’m turning my negative into a positive

    subtracting all the strife and start living my life.

    Trust and believe I been through the storm and rain

    and come out a different way I came.

    The sun is shinning so bright

    because I know what I’m doing and it feels so right.

    I’m in a position to help a lot of people and I love it.

    But people who claim they love me want to take advantage of it.

    I’m not gonna lie, I try to hide my feelings so deep inside.

    I wake up some mornings with tears swellin in my eyes.

    So I my pen stab the page especially when I feel a lot of rage.

    In hopes that the trapped feelings that got me locked in this cage

    will break free.

    Won’t never let this anger overtake me

    Cause actions of another never make me or break me.

    I will never let them shake me and no matter what I

    Never wish bad on those who hate me,

    the ones we often call our enemies.

    On the other hand I’m surrounded by the greastest team.

    Who wouldn’t trade me for anything and I thank God for bringing

    then to me, and I hope one day they will see me …ACHIEVE!

    So I say to you today I am going to lift my head up above the rest.

    Let go of all the stress.

    Strive hard to do my best.

    Because I know I’m living blessed.

    My heart beats strong through my chest.

    Can’t live in fear and be in all kinda mess.

    Because all that does is leave you in distress.

    So Iam going to strengthen up and do right,

    But know this thing doesn’t happen over night.

    Just lettin you in on what I know because as of

    Today I plant my seed and I promise to GROW!




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    chinawhyte729 commented on AS I GROW!

    11-02-2009

    This is a touching positive poem. I truley enjoyed reading this. Great job.... I really like this

    duty commented on AS I GROW!

    05-27-2009

    His eye is on the sparrow and I know He's watching over you. Keep the faith as you grow. And your poetry is in the tops.

    KingGeorgeII commented on AS I GROW!

    03-15-2009

    very well written! Keep up the great work! check out my book website at www.LifeisHurricanes.com Again keep up the great work!

    Moni commented on AS I GROW!

    03-10-2009

    Great! I specially like the positive beginning and the upbeat ending. It's a good flow.

    nikkiquander commented on AS I GROW!

    03-01-2009

    soulful this is a very touching poem. i tried to rate higher but for some reason wouldn't let me. keep it up girl!!!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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