Awaken

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  • Confusion

    Awaken

    My thoughts flow wildly
    Like a torrential river
    Recklessly raging as I writhe to escape
    My mind is constantly escaping my body
    But, my body can't quite ever seem to escape my mind
    I always feel like I'm awake when I'm dreaming
    Yet, I feel as if I'm always dreaming when I'm awake
    I fervently flee from the facade of reality
    And, emphatically embrace my ellusive illusions
    If I wake up, will everyone disappear?
    If you wake up, will I disappear?

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    ndg commented on Awaken

    01-16-2009

    Can honestly relate.....

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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