Azure Eyes

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    i think it sounds better. thanks tempy for the idea.

    Azure Eyes
    I fell for those azure eyes
    I speak only truth, no lies
    Her eyes so deep blue
    The eyes of the sky
    I'm in a trance
    Hypnotized by her eyes
    It just happened by chance
    That I happened to glance
    Nothing new surrounds me
    Nothing else impress me
      I do not even see
    Others that pass me
    This is what catches my eyes
      Wanting to see something new
    I stare into the sky
    Deep into her azure eyes








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    rainyxsun commented on Azure Eyes

    07-15-2010

    Awwwww. This is a very nice dream girl of yours ! x3 I gotta say that this is very cute.
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    Tempy commented on Azure Eyes

    09-24-2009

    I like it U do :P I think it was a really beautiful poem hey. Can't wa to to read more.
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    luck4cookie commented on Azure Eyes

    08-31-2009

    I like your poem,were you talking about someone special in your life.
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    AzurePoet

    08/31/2009

    more of a dream girl, but inspired by someone in my life

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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