Balance

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It's wierd how the winner wrote a poem of the same name the day I finally rturned to the sight

Balance

Approaching 3 A.M.

I wondered

what I sought

From the balance

betwixt

sight and blindness

my good eye

captured the enigma

of an intriguing concept

Before my third eye

it placed

a transforming though;

“How does it stand”?

Through crystal clarity

and with crystal clarity

I approached the figure

Upon a tiny base

it stood

a human-like form

Again; “How does it stand”?

“It’s got to be wires”!

I convinced

my humble mind

I perceived no wires

Yet it stood

Before daylight I realized

It must be

 

 

perfectly balanced…

no strings attached

Exactly what we all seek

quite the simile

of the full moon

that lights the path

of my poem

My quest became

“How many balances

must I achieve

to be whole

No Strings Attached”?

 

 

__________________________

                                                                                               Roxane

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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