bam bam.

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    this goes out to.... *gives trophy*

    bam bam.

    walking, stumbling..

    yet still managed to SMILE.

    yabah yabah smile to the world.

    thats what she does best,

    FAKE it all.


    she has the grace of a ballerina,

    stunning, beautiful looks like of a dew drop fairy..

    HAHA...

    dew

    drop

    fairy.


    sweet treat for a lost soul.


    many of us today,

    need some legal advice.

    since when did pretty barbies need a life?

    ever since they tried to mess up.


    mess up their life,

    for vanity.

    for make belive stories.

    of men cad with brilliant uniforms,

    ready to embrace their lost cinderella..

    and hey, look!

    here comes cinderella...

    ready to kiss and canoodle with her,

    prince charming...

    with the 7 dwarves.

    those cutesy lil creatures.

    yep, in my story,

    they exist.


    EXISTENCE/

    we need it.

    some PIECE OF MIND?

    yes we need it.
    N E E D.

    what she needs,

    is a real life.

    some real friends.

    a real family.

    who will love her.

    adore her.

    possibly pamper her...

    with LOVE.


    accept her,

    MISTAKES.

    understand her,

    for her being insane,

    sometimes....


    have u ever...

    ever ever..

    heard of LOVE before?

    love...

    that surpasses all negative things.

    ALL bad things...

    for love abounds nothing,

    it is endless.

    ...........................
    ..........................
    .............................


    the world,

    may blind you..

    bling bling bling...


    scwhing scwhing scwhing...

    gliteratti galore,

    shoes from gucci stores

    milan milan..

    that is not love.


    are u contented with that???

    theres this man i know..

    who took away EVERYTHING i have..

    EVERYTHING i love..

    EVERYTHING i owned.

    the loves of my life...


    but He gave me life...

    life everlasting.

    dismiss this?

    religious?

    churchy?

    NO!!!!


    this is the truth.

    throw it to the horizon,

    run away with ur eyes watery and skip skip skip this.


    THIS TRUTH.

    laid beofre u.

    not a LIE.

    this man,

    who are we that He is mindful of us???

    sinful.

    gore-ish.

    selfish.

    dying,
    rotting,
    rotting,
    rotting....


    SAVIOR. KING. JESUS.


    your CALL...

    CHANGE...

    or become a victim of "their" change.

    always has been theirs.

    what about yours?

    when will u move

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    aesan’s Poems (10)

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    B A C K 0
    normalities 0
    loneliness NOT 0
    break. free. 0
    bam bam. 0
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    flushed cheeks. 2
    trashed. 1
    insane assylum to dance 3