insane assylum to dance

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i made this peom whenever i have a crush on someone. it depends upon the intensity of the words i use. this to me is weird, coz its so strong, good thing i was able to not let it get to me. so cool hehehe..

insane assylum to dance

a crush...


'i call it sanity'



pls tell me to stop.

coz i think im not gonna

stop,

thinking...

about you.


yes i know i know

i hab to stop

this foolishness,

i feel...

yes can u believe it.

i can actually feel.

and look..

im feeding my emotions too.

pathetic.

tae.

dog crap.




leave these thots alone.

haha dats like taking evry breathe out f me.

vital you see.

i even see it as un-poetic.

in my insane assylum again and again.

how ever shall stop.

stop.
stop.
stop.

to just stop.

re-think.
re-process.
re-program.

u give me goosebumps.
heck even chills.
heat.
swelling.

go on...

u can shoot me now.



baaaaannggg....


coz over and over i luk at ur picture.

even if how long iv bin

staring...

at ur face.

are eccentrics liike this...

easily  fallin inlove.

so easily fooled.

by their dumb dumb emotions.

but the need to see u

and d urge,

d desire,

the longing,

to be with you...

is sooooooo strong.

i cant drive myself,

to being,

in my normal state,

ever again.



tae.

bow.


err, dog shit.
turd.
dung dung dung....

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DeepEclipse commented on insane assylum to dance

12-10-2009

Hahah. It lives up to its name. The ending kinda threw stuff off for me, but you show sporadic energy throughout. Does he drive you that crazy? lol.

aesan

12/10/2009

just a crush. i just love tensions building up and bout the ending,hahaha, i really dont know what to say anymore hihi

fathermadness commented on insane assylum to dance

12-05-2009

lol funny, i like it its a differnt stlye than mine

aesan

12/06/2009

hihi over the years i have come to my senses that having ur own style and not copying others will ROCK for good hihi..thankyou sir...

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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