Basement Monster

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I made this poem for an LA class, and I liked it.  I was supposed to use a bunch of vocabulary words.  Hope you like it too!

Basement Monster

The transition from light to dark,
with trepidation, the floor I mark.
My feet creep through,
with a sense of impending doom.

I then decide to devise a plan
to get out of there as fast as I can.
Up the basement stairs, concrete, new,
making a move I knew I'd rue.

The basement monster finds me, grabs me!
Strangling, losing vitality...
My neck, now as thin as a Popsicle,
oh, woe, how could my end be so whimsical?

My fingers, twitching, reach up to grab something veritable,
some matted fur, perhaps, of course nothing personable.
I feel his coarse wire fur,
his dexterous hands find my vocal chords.

Oh why, oh why did I go?
Down to the basement, and below?
I engross myself in these thoughts as I slowly go...

I can't ferret my way out of this,
under the hairy, clenched fist.
Why choose me? I think and cough,
the rising abyss to which I fall is not something at which to scoff.

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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