best friends

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best friends

from elementary to high school. from beginning to end. through all the years their friendship grew. they both felt the same but neither knew. each waking moment since day they met. they both loved eachother from sunrise to sunset. he was all she had in her terrible life. he was the one who kept from her knife. she was his angel she made him smile. though life threw him curves she made it all worth while. then one day things went terribly wrong. the next few weeks were like a very sad song. he made her jealous on purpose he tried. when the girl asked do you love her? on purpose he lied. he played with jealousy like it was a game. little did he know things would never be the same. his plan was working but he had no clue. how wrong things would go the damage he would do. one night she broke down feeling very alone. just her and the blade no one else home. she dialed his number he answered hello. she told him she loved him and hung up the phone. he raced to her house just a minute to late. found her lying in blood her heart had no rate. beside her a note in it confession. her love for this boy her only obsession. as he read the note he knelt down and cried. grabbed her knife that night they both died. she was found in his arms both of them dead. under her note his handwriting said: i loved her so she nver knew all this time i loved her too.

By: Cynthia Jones

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lonewolf commented on best friends

08-17-2010

reminded me of the song "whiskey lullabye" very nicely done

tynise1014 commented on best friends

08-17-2010

this was very deep gg i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

slim48 commented on best friends

06-25-2010

Wow. I love this poem its the best one i read in a long time.

jj1562 commented on best friends

05-15-2010

so much like the tragety of Romeo and Juliet but i love the modurn twist and whymust they all describe me?

LeeLee420xx commented on best friends

05-15-2010

I yhought it was very groovy, gave me goose bumps :)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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my mom/my best friend 1
no regrets 1
emotions 1
never letting go 1
mixed emotions 3
Never stopped and realized 0
life changing 1
what hurts the most 4
dear whoever cares 1
miss you my brother 4
why did you change 6
op: just not the same 5
miracle 1
anybody there?? 2
what did i do 5
the day you walked into my life 3
air is real 2
lies 4
god is real 9
bad dreams 6
broken heart can never be healed 3
My sunshine 9
My sunshine 3
death 20
nature 10
My forever lost friend (jecovah my cat) 8
About me 8
Mistake 9
why? 9
christmas 1
Someone you love 3
connection 6
Missing something in my life 5
best friends 9
to a loving mother, daughter, and girlfriend 5
the dark 6
you always loved me 3
today is the day 8