connection

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connection

Earth, water, fire, and air
Look at the horizon and stare.
what do you see
is it you is it me.
Neither, its dark waves moving faster
While you trod along by your master.
Seeing no one else insight
only me and you on that beautiful night.
I felt this connection
that can't be denied
like a simple fraction
you by my side.
Hearing your heart beat
feeling like I've been swept off my feet.
you look into my eyes
I feel like I'm drowning
you see that surprise
your smiling, and I'm not frowning.

By: Cynthia Jones

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Kaleidoscope commented on connection

02-16-2010

Way too Go!!! So far this one is my favorite...I am not done reading yet..Take care Kaleidoscope

sk8ergirl commented on connection

02-12-2010

nice poem..........i feel the emotion......sk8er\m/(_

sk8ergirl

02/14/2010

\m/(_

kpeery09 commented on connection

12-05-2009

very nice, this seems like it can be classified as spiritual or something, but yeah very nice...I am going to rate this as a 10

ShanneN commented on connection

11-07-2009

AWWW, this was really cute, i enjoyed reading it!! it was great. great job!!! =D

boomboom56 commented on connection

10-21-2009

Oh young love is grand. You have put in words some good feelings and I hope this fella knows what he has. Most of the poems are sad or angry, it's nice to read a happy one. Please continue to write.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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