Bless be the heart

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    • cloudburst
    • I have learned that, life is tough, but I am tougher....

    Bless be the heart

    Bless be the heart, so pure and soft,

    A pearl in; Deep Ocean of dark and hatred.

     

    It is not that you beautiful, but beauty describes you.

    How I go so lucky? To have a piece of you. 

     

    All day long, I quest for words, to describe you,

    Not to entice you, but merely to satisfy me.

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    icu2 commented on Bless be the heart

    01-14-2010

    Nice poem fella. Probably want to change the line where you say "It's not that you're beautiful, but beauty describes you." If you wrote this for me and I read it. All I would see was that you said that I was not beautiful, and that would hurt. I don't care who she is, she wants to hear you say that she is beautiful, and that beauty describes her. Good luck on that! Bye now.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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