These Letters

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  • Friendship
    • cloudburst
    • I have learned that, life is tough, but I am tougher....

    These Letters

    These small little litters that hold us tight, for which we wait,
    To stir our lives;

    I felt like some boy, when I looked at the sky,
    To create your figure in mist and fog;

    I do want to say, so many things to you,
    So as to listen, stories from you;

    But for sure we live in the realities of this world,
    Some time doctor and other time friends will take us apart;

    These small letters must hold us tight

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    TamiG76 commented on These Letters

    05-22-2009

    heart wrenching and poignant. Hauntingly beautiful. Good flow as well as great direction. Overall Zia, I really liked it.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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