BODY LIKE A TEMPLE

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    BODY LIKE A TEMPLE
    Body like a temple of divine love,
    To dwell amongst your temple is what I dream of.
    To worship at your alter, to worship you in prayer
    To worship your temple, to show you I care.

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    BrielleC commented on BODY LIKE A TEMPLE

    02-27-2009

    This could be expanded upon, it doesnt pull the reader in. The rhyme makes it sound too simple.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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