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    I pray for a moment

    i’m screaming out loud

    god if YOU’RE out there

    please help me now

     

    never this low

    this low before

    has this life pushed me

    down to the floor

     

    i fell to the bottom

    i crashed right on through

    throw me a lifeline

    show me some truth

     

    show me some sunlight

    give me some hope

    don’t let me die here

    throw me a rope

     

    give me a chance

    to prove it all wrong

    give me the strength

    to stand and walk on

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    Tempestlady commented on Bottom

    02-07-2011

    Been there, called and got an answer. Not always the answer i wanted, but always later found out why. I would like to read a poem about what got you there in the first place. A wonder piece of work and very inspirational. Write on.....and remember, sometimes unanswered prayers and one of God's greatest gifts. ....................................Tlady
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    ahardwalk commented on Bottom

    02-05-2011

    I'm hoping you found your strength cause hitting rock bottom can take its toll on anyone beautiful write!
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    Teardrops commented on Bottom

    02-05-2011

    Your strength i s your writings they are wonderful , from the heart and great . This is a winner in any contest Marie
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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