Wish

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Wish

I woke upon a moonlit night

The stars were never ending

A slight breeze blew across my face

I sighed and then imagined

 

I wonder if you gaze upon

The same stars that I see

I wonder if you look above

Somehow, think of me

 

Sometimes it feels like you are here

Or maybe I am there

Even on the cloudy days

I feel we are together

 

As days, go by I think of you

And wonder how you are

I stare upon a moonlit sky

And wish upon a star

 

I dream of being with you

Till then I walk alone

With heavy heart and clouded eyes

Awaiting your return

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Tempestlady commented on Wish

08-26-2012

I hate the feelings of longing and missing. If I had my way I would be with everything I love everyday. The hole left inside, gets harder to hide and others just see the pain and i can't explain and this poem obviously went straight to my brain. Well done. Write on..............Tlady

markah79 commented on Wish

02-05-2011

I just have to say, excellent. Keep writing, you're very good at it.

Teardrops commented on Wish

02-05-2011

Amazing how you can put so much love into so few lines loved this and they say i write great love poems they need to read yours great write Marie

Beaker

02/10/2011

Thank you

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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