BREWED COFFEE

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    BREWED COFFEE

    I need a coffee

    cause I am sleepy

    That really is effective

    Can flow to my soul and body

     

    I sip all the coffee here,

    But I can’t see the most effective.

    Still, I am sleepy

    Is there any brewed coffee for me?

     

    When I first met you,

    I’m easily attracted to you

    And yes, surely I do

    So please, don’t leave me too.

     

    I can’t sleep each night

    because you’re always on my mind

    I don’t know what's the problem;

    But you’re my life after

     

    I know it’s hard to leave you

    now that I’m already addicted with you

    I just proved that you’re my coffee mate

    And I assure you, I’m your perfect mate.

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    amamimichiyo commented on BREWED COFFEE

    06-09-2009

    hmmm.....i think ur metaphor on this poem is just fine but meaningful... i like it because it's simple though it has a little metaphor in this poem...(",)

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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