BREWED COFFEE

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    BREWED COFFEE

    I need a coffee

    cause I am sleepy

    That really is effective

    Can flow to my soul and body

     

    I sip all the coffee here,

    But I can’t see the most effective.

    Still, I am sleepy

    Is there any brewed coffee for me?

     

    When I first met you,

    I’m easily attracted to you

    And yes, surely I do

    So please, don’t leave me too.

     

    I can’t sleep each night

    because you’re always on my mind

    I don’t know what's the problem;

    But you’re my life after

     

    I know it’s hard to leave you

    now that I’m already addicted with you

    I just proved that you’re my coffee mate

    And I assure you, I’m your perfect mate.

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    amamimichiyo commented on BREWED COFFEE

    06-09-2009

    hmmm.....i think ur metaphor on this poem is just fine but meaningful... i like it because it's simple though it has a little metaphor in this poem...(",)
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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