broken lines

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    broken lines

     Life, has never been kind
    to those that don't live by whats defined
    the ones that walk the broken lines 
    the ones that lead the way
    Fucked over by fate, or so it seems
    Lying amidst your broken dreams
    trying to get by at any means
    You've got to take control
    Master your own destiny 
    Make your own reality

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    UnbreakableLove commented on broken lines

    06-11-2009

    I really enjoyed this. It was raw and to the point. It was absolutely correct in how life is and what it is about. (P.S. The f word rocks...lol)
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    madpoet123 commented on broken lines

    05-31-2009

    i LIKE THIS,HOWEVER SHOCKING...i SOMETIMES WRITE LIKE THAT,iD STILL TAKE THE f WORD OUT TO APPEAR MORE PROFFESSIONAL TO THOSE WHO LIKE MY WORK ON sCRIBD.COM WE HAVE nbc EXECUTIVES LOOKING UP FRESH TALENT AND WE WANT TO BE PROS,,OK SORRY TO PREACH AT YA,BUT THE MADPOET CARES...
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    LadyMariah

    06/09/2009

    Lol, Thanks for your care :)

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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