Broken Sympathies and One Way Belief

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    Broken Sympathies and One Way Belief

    In between all the stars
    She has chosen middle bright one
    I had to bring anyhow happiness
    This life for her
    So I am for whom
    Only for her in conclusion.

    I started throwing rope
    A long rope
    To pull her choice the star
    My through was exact
    I thought of full concentration
    I fought for whole life.

    A day passed night passed
    Like this years and decade
    As well as century passed
    But star was visible
    Only to the night
    My waiting to meet the night.

    A cycle of my attempt
    Day after night
    My happiness in night
    When I got chance to see the star
    The day to pull
    It will be happy night.

    My regular attempt of pulling
    All the stars were fallen
    In the heart of my land
    And spread over surroundings in many pieces
    But there was nothing than breaking
    Of my dream and my heart.

    That heart in which I believed
    Betrayed, giving me chances for
    To get it broken and smashed
    Cracked with disbelief
    Only I thought I did
    Injustice to the stars
    I lost in loneliness, left nothing.

    Her move in the high in the use of mine
    She was as laughing moon
    Teasing me in my madness
    Of my one way move
    I woke up with the lost way
    With the dragging mood.

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    SilverGirl commented on Broken Sympathies and One Way Belief

    07-08-2009

    I love this poem kam.. your love and devotion shines through as the brightest star in the sky..Well done! Thank you for sharing.. Hugs.. SilverGirl

    Artie commented on Broken Sympathies and One Way Belief

    06-05-2009

    This is an excellent poem.... My imagination is racing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ladydraeko commented on Broken Sympathies and One Way Belief

    06-03-2009

    i like how you use the stars in this poem to convey your message. Your vision is clear and it makes sense to me keep on writing! HUGS

    Adara commented on Broken Sympathies and One Way Belief

    05-26-2009

    I must say well done. I love your diction(word usage) in this poem it makes the reader think about what you have to say and that is a great thing

    blu commented on Broken Sympathies and One Way Belief

    04-26-2009

    I applaud you, I've felt what you wrote

    kamaldahal

    05/28/2009

    Thanks a lot Blu. I am impressive and will try to write more like this. Kamal

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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