Bronzed children

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    Bronzed children

    What about the children all covered in bronze
    the perfection parents put on them
    never are they asked how they feel about
    the televised world that they live in told what to do
    childhood is trial and error fall down and
    pick yourself back up again
    learn from your mistakes
    you only get one life to live
    so much life is wasted
    what about the children all covered in bronze
    what kind of a life do they lead?

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    Drivingczar commented on Bronzed children

    04-17-2009

    Yes, the fabled "ivory tower treatment"! They will grow and follow their own paths! Great write!

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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