Brothers

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Other
    • Lollipop
    • Well, Brianne You might have lost the GAME but sadly I lost YOU to a guy named Dylan!!:(

    Poem Commentary

    this is about brothers and ther little sister (me)

    Brothers

    brothers
    they're mean
    they're a team
    when it comes to being mean....
    to meee
    but in the end
    i love them to much
    to tell them i hated them
    would be a disaster
     so...my brothers
    are my brothers
    The ar and always will be................
    Brothers

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Chaos128 commented on Brothers

    12-09-2010

    Ha ha Sounds like you're saying "If you can't beat 'em, join 'em". If so, you're not the first, and won't be the last. I like the philosophical tone.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    Lollipop’s Poems (9)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    lonley 1
    Brothers 1
    Just me 1
    friends 2
    only if 1
    Doors 0
    The guessing game 0
    Life 0
    The love 0