Bye, Bye Auntie

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    I really upset because my aunt died, and I wanted to express my feelings about her.

    Bye, Bye Auntie

     My sister I have already dished her,
    My brother who wants his custard,
    But all I wanted was to see my auntie,
    One more time before she died,
    "Bye, cruel world,"
    She thought,
    As I sighed,
    Mom says death is natural,
    I thought taking a breath was natural,
    And we all know life isn't fair

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Bye, Bye Auntie

    01-15-2011

    I think this is a wonderful expression of one's self and sad that she had to go.
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    Topaz2011 commented on Bye, Bye Auntie

    01-13-2011

    Deeply expressed of grief...I really enjoyed reading. Thanks! Topaz
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    copergirl commented on Bye, Bye Auntie

    01-13-2011

    How very good. I am seeing so many concepts in the undercurrent of this simple poem which isn't simple at all.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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