Can I be free?

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    Can I be free?

     Can i be free?
    No
    I don't think its meant for me.
    But just when I think I am,
    just when i think I have found my rainbow other the strom reality kicks.
    And proves to me that eyes can play games like decite.
    Fooling your heart to believe that life is sweeter then the bitter treat it really is.
    I'm crying in my soul but no longer through my eyes
    cause if any one see's that, that will just give them another reason to cretaize.
    I'll try to servive
    but I got one question
    does thy end of my pain mean the end of my days?
    I'm asking

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    chalkout91 commented on Can I be free?

    07-26-2009

    you are someone you mean something dont ever forget that even when no one understands there will always be the hope of abetter tomorow
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    ladybugp

    07/31/2009

    thanks much thats what i needed to hear

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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