Can You Imagine...

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    Can You Imagine...

    A world without hate

    A universe without life

     

    A world without love

    A lake without doves

     

    A stone without dirt

    A life without meaning

     

    A car without gas

    A human without a brain

     

    A king without power

    A princess without her diamonds

     

    A school without students

    Why do we exist?

     

    By: Joshua Gauger

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    THATONEGIRL commented on Can You Imagine...

    05-31-2009

    i love this one its great...it really opens up my mind to think about everything and what would it be like with out all these things..never really put any thought into it until now
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    blackwolf5115 commented on Can You Imagine...

    05-29-2009

    very deep. I like how you wrote this one because the imagery is easy to paint in your head. it can use it a little bit of work, but very good foundation
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    Joshy

    05/29/2009

    Thanks! =) Eh, I'm only an amaetur at this, it was one of my very first poems.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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