Cleansing Rain

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    Cleansing Rain

    Cold rain falls against the pane,
    of my home above the clouds.
    cool and brisk
    smell of dew
    as rain drops to the ground.
    In hopes in which I still believe
    that all the bad is gone,
    That it would wash away my pain,
    my sorrows that hold on strong.

    and when the sky realeases,
    all the rain it tends to hold
    I anxiously await  the sun
    to shine my darkend soul.

    To which I tend to emerge from
    when the rain has finally set.
    the brightness in the aiir it fills
    My feet still very wet.

    softly i tend to recognize
    the changes in my heart,
    That give me strength when I am down
    and gets me out the dark


    Oh rain wash all my pain and fears,
    come back to me someday.
    And wash all of this hurt I feel.
    come back again one day

    A cleansing of the body,
    Of spirit and of mind,
    Baptism of some sort 
    With  the bad real far  behind.

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    redbloodink commented on Cleansing Rain

    06-07-2010

    Jesus was my rain and did what you wrote here for me......... red

    inkmaster commented on Cleansing Rain

    12-17-2009

    A Poem of great flow ..I injoyed the read ..Thanks for sharing.... Inkmaster

    lisy14u2c

    12/17/2009

    thank you so much...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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