My Regret

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    My Regret

    I found myself alone one day, the silence felt so cold,
    Your lips to kiss, your eyes that stare, no loving arms to hold.
    As I sit here and I watch, the time that hurries by,
    The day will come to my surprise and you'll be by my side.
    Walls surround my inner voice, that wants to scream and yell,
    Beneath the darkness and the guilt of not saying farewell.
    Toward the path it seems, I'm getting closer to the truth.
    The farthest were apart, my love, the love is yet induced.
    I stare into a picture frame, your face seems so sincere,
    The love you claim you've given me, is really rather clear.
    And now I sit here, all alone, remembering your smile,
    That makes my life so full of joy, A memory worthwhile.
    I'm longing for your safe return, my heart and soul await,
    So I no longer have to question, That this is truly fate.

    L.T.G






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    kdavidscott1 commented on My Regret

    05-28-2009

    This poem is superb - tremendously expressing your regret for not saying farewell in letting the one you love know all of this at the time of his departure - the depth of your love for him. When he return I pray - then will be the time to make up for your regrets - it's sort of like not giving a person flowers and then we they are dead here people come with flowers the dead cannot smell - we must learn to show our love and care while our loved ones are here to share those feelings with you - ot

    Panaramicpoet commented on My Regret

    05-21-2009

    Very nice. I like the depth of thought and how u expressed yourself. Hope that person has returned to you alread . . it makes me sad to think about . . I have to wait a few months to be with my fiancee. Can get very lonely. Robert ;)

    Phoenix9 commented on My Regret

    05-14-2009

    great job, love the way it flows

    aggieprof commented on My Regret

    05-14-2009

    I like your style. Your rhyming schemes are very good. Also your work flows very smoothly.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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