Cody's Lament

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    Cody's Lament

    I will tell you a secret you may not know.
    Give me your ear, and I'll give you a show.
    Let me tell you about my sorrowful life.
    That countlessly stabbed me with a knife.
    I knew a girl that world my world.
    A dove from above who showed me love.
    But the rain made a strain that caused me pain.
    All that's left is a crest that is have in a chest.
    Everything is wrong, my love is gone, never another dawn.
    Only the pureness of black made itself present.
    If the sun is down, I must go, this is my lament.

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    Margot commented on Cody's Lament

    08-12-2009

    very good writing i can relate to the one that got away my ex drown 4 yrs ago and he was the love of my life.im still trying to get over this check out my poems and ull see i can definitely feel ur pain

    BrielleC commented on Cody's Lament

    02-25-2009

    You have a good start here but i think it would a stronger effect if it didnt rhyme.

    chadallac74 commented on Cody's Lament

    02-25-2009

    Cool... nice flow and nice messege. Who do you think gave you the 10!!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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