Come Hit Me Up

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  • Blove420
  • feelin like a bird in da sky flyin so high dat i cnt leave da sky

Come Hit Me Up

Come hit me up, but just dont tease me. Your love is what I'm fein-n- 4, with your soft sweet touch(sst). As I run my fingers through ure silkie soft hair(ssh). Kissin your neck so softly, making you want me. I think about it. "If I should, or should't" give it 2 you. As I look at your face it calls my name, but I never want 2 put you in pain. I never want 2 make you feel left out, so thatz why I call you up, so we can hang-out. Your hands rubbing on me, a soft kiss will say everything. Hours later we're still doing our thing. Please don't run away, cuz ma love nothing will be the same. All I ask 4 if, we keep it real with each other, so hit me up when your ready 2 spill. They call me the doctor I'll come-n- bundle you up. It aint all about the fuck, so girl if you've got something on your mind, U need 2 let me know whats-up. So come hit me up, but don't take all day, my love I can't wait.

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MsKrystle commented on Come Hit Me Up

06-22-2009

Yeah this does almost sound like a song..... I liked it...Its good to know that a guy wants to listen vs. just f*ck. Nice work

kym commented on Come Hit Me Up

05-21-2009

that is a very true and honest poem i really like you and how you see things i can not stress that to you enough on how important it is espscially you as a male which makes you ten times more attractive than any other man

Blove420

05/27/2009

awww thxs hun. I hope I can read some of ur poems as well. I would luv it very much. Holla @ ya later

loveangel4life commented on Come Hit Me Up

05-21-2009

-Wow, that was really cute. i guess this poem is from experience aye? Sounds almost like an R&B song.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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