Commitment

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Commitment

commitment.
is that not your thing?
i'm a replacement
what do i brinG?
a kiss when your lips go numb
a warmth when you are cold
a heart when you need someone to care
A thing better left untold
a hand to comfort your sorrowful heart
a voice that tells you lies
someone to trust when no one else will
a love that neveR dies
a land for you to walk upon
when you're set out to drown
someone to tell you it's okay
when Distrust is all you've found
that's why you need me here today
that's why you won't let go
you just won't lEt me get away
from the pain that you bestow
sure i meaN a lot to you
all the things i list
but when you've found another target
i am simply dismissed
i don't know how to fit the part
even though i try
i guess commitment's not your thing
at least not for you and i.

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TonyPoet commented on Commitment

03-29-2010

you sure your only 16 Kaylynn? lol ...........i like it your a very good poet i respect that..

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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