Complex Crashing

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    Complex Crashing

    I’m quite drowsy like a drowsy
    Puffy eyed looking lousy and lightheaded
    I’m walking half-awake looking quite baked
    With a pattern of steps like penguins marching
    Bopping from side to side
    I’m now quite sea-sick and quite offside
    Just stupendous
    Rocking motions casting soggy notions
    I’ll hurl out my entire stomach sack
    Just like a mariner suffering from scurvy
    I’m walking the plank of double jeopardy
    Dodging the sharp pit with a cloud swinger recipe
    So who breaks the ice-sheet of thinning ice?
    Could it be a gambling fisherman in the ocean with a pair of lucky dice?
    I’m flushed shuffling like a Prozac groove shaker
    But, I can’t find my pacifier
    So I’ll throw a fit and get the sucker

    By : Phantom Gargoyle

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    hdmac commented on Complex Crashing

    08-15-2009

    This person is feeling quite sick indeed. Almost hellishly sick.

    fenixmind commented on Complex Crashing

    03-13-2009

    Dont we aall feel like his sometimes!and put it nicely in this piece... cool job!

    Phatom

    06/01/2009

    I'll clap hands on the gesture that your words do bring my habits great joy

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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