Confessions...

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Confessions...

Confessions from the Journal of a Manically Depressed

My mind is too scattered, I think.
Fervent fingers drive pen across paper and
I spill my strife out into ink.

In dreams I watch a white tide shrink
from conscious thought to sleeping sand-
my mind is too scattered, I think.

I awake and wait for sleep to sink
into my eyes while with my hand
I spill my strife out into ink.

Across the page inky tendrils slink
in patterns of poison that expand-
my mind is too scattered, I think.

I scrawl everyday pettiness to the brink
of turning a brainchild's melody bland.
I spill my strife out into ink.

I willed my life and dreams to link
together, but they would not stand-
my mind is too scattered, I think.
I spill my strife out into ink.

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terrellharrisjr commented on Confessions...

05-26-2009

I dig the rhyming scheme here. I had to read the poem a few times so that I would stop jumping ahead to the I think parts. There is some nice phrasing in there, good piece.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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