Crying In The Rain

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This is the very first poem I ever wrote!!

Crying In The Rain

Sometimes I feel like crying,
But I hold it back.
I dont want anyone to see me,
So That's why I cry in the Rain!!
When I cry, Its like rain drops,
Falling from my eyes, So
No one knows thats I am really crying
When inside I am dying.
I try to put up a front, So
No one knows how I really feel inside,
When everyone thinks I am happy,
And Sometimes mean, What they dont know,
Is that I am holding my emotions back,
From when the times I cried in the Rain!!

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