What do you do

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    • rachelleann28
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    This is actually a song I wrote!!! But it can also but written as a poem!!!

    What do you do

     What do you do, when there's nothing left.
    Nothing left to hold on to.
    No one is there by your side when you cry
    And when you feel like giving up there's no one left to lift you up.

    Cause there's nothing left for me anymore.
    Nothing to make me happy again.
    So, what do you do just what do you do, when there's nothing left.
    Cause I gave up on finding an answer, cause every time I looked, there was nothing to find.

    Just take one breath and try to forget it.
    But it's too hard to forget what he did.
    He broke my heart, he said he was sorry, he was sorry, he said it wasn't me and that I did nothing wrong.
    But inside I feel all the pain and I'll never be the same ever again.

    I tried to move on and I kinda did.
    And still to this day, I can picture him saying my name over and over again.
    But it's over, it's over and I cant take it.

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    JJMann commented on What do you do

    10-18-2009

    Easy to say the love of one so young cannot have a meaningful depth. Easy to say each new day can contain every dream. I loved when I was young, too. And lost, and won, and loved again. It is the state of loving that the soul yearns for - come what may. So many years ahead for so many beautiful loves - have faith, you'll see,child. And write your soul! - all are similar, none are the same as you ...
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    blackshadow commented on What do you do

    09-17-2009

    inner soul writings are the best read thats when people can relate good job
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    rachelleann28

    10/04/2009

    thanks

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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