Crying

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    This was written on my husband and I's 3 year annivarsary when we were seperated. Now we are happily married and have a wonderful daughter.

    Crying

     I'm crying on thje inside
    And I want it to stop
    I know why
    But I want it to stop

    There is only one reason
    And one reason only
    On why I'm feeling
    The way I am

    I'm starting to miss him
    And I don't want to think about him
    I just want everything to stop
    To stop playing with my mind

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    alreedus commented on Crying

    12-01-2010

    It is ok to cry on the outside, Sweetheart. That takes the pressure off the butterlies in your heart that look for cover from the falling drops. - Alan
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