Cycled

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  • Confusion

    Cycled


    Thinking of our souls and what it all might mean,
    answers back and forth, over & over I have seen.
    Ones step forward three steps back, we struggle to stay on track.
    Conforming, reforming our individuality soon we have no concept of reality.
    We are based off of anothers choice, there decision to bring us in this worlds vision. So we have become a never ending cycle of someone elses theme.
    Why must it be so that we have become full of greed and hate, we snub are noses at another like they are 2nd rate.
    choices that are made from past to present to past again, we never
    seem to make our troubles end.
    I am just another chosen one, to walk amungst us all woundering when it is all going to fall...

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Cycled

    04-14-2011

    A Book comes to my mind that i read passages from as i read lots of peoples poems and especially this one here.. The book~Secret

    mikael commented on Cycled

    08-27-2009

    it is deffinitely intresting, to say the least, how many times have you been hurt, can you count them on one hand, and if so how deeply run the wounds, onl one that has been hurt has a depth of insight.

    ArizonaPlay

    08/27/2009

    this is so true and thank you for your commentit is very appreciated

    AZsbiggestfan commented on Cycled

    02-19-2009

    very good i wish i had your talent of word usage u always put it so right love you baby never stop writting

    chadallac74 commented on Cycled

    02-16-2009

    Nice.

    Plot121 commented on Cycled

    02-16-2009

    this is a well done poem the message was very well played out good work Robert...

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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